Mardi: and a Voyage Thither:
Disappointed by the sales of Omoo, averse to publishing fiction at any rate, and unhappy with the state of international copyright law and Melville's high asking price, John Murray rejected the manuscript of Mardi. Melville's British agent then offered the book to Richard Bentley, who paid Melville 200 guineas for the right to publish the new work.
Mardi was originally intended as a fictional South Seas adventure story, an idea Melville claimed was inspired by the many attacks upon the veracity of Typee and Omoo. As the story progressed, however, he began to slide increasingly into satire and metaphysical speculation, eventually displacing his customary first-person narrator in favor of three external characters representing philosophical, narrative, and poetic voices, with a fourth to mediate between them. The resulting book revealed the first blossoming of the intellectual growth and spiritual searching that would shape Melville's later works, but it sold poorly and most readers were annoyed by its confused construction and continual "rhapsodising".
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"Now, I am my own soul's
emperor; and my first act is abdication! Hail! realm of shades!"
-- and turning my prow into the racing tide, which seized me like
a hand omnipotent, I darted through.
Churned in foam, the
outer ocean lashed the clouds; and straight in my white wake,
headlong dashed a shallop, three fixed specters leaning o'er its
prow: three arrows poising.
And thus, pursuers and pursued
flew on, over an endless sea. --concluding
paragraphs
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The work is a compound of Robinson Crusoe and
Gulliver's Travels, seasoned throughout with German
metaphysics of the most transcendental school. The great
questions of natural religion, necessity, free-will, and so
on.... are treated with much ingenuity, and frequently with a
richness of imagination which disguises the triteness of the
leading ideas. Politics take their share of the work -- not often
well, sometimes most absurdly illustrated. The habits of modern
society come in for an occasional fling. But the great merit of
the work is its fanciful descriptions of nature amid all her
variations. Some of the cleverest, even the most brilliant,
passages occur when the author fairly gives himself up to his own
singular and quaint contemplations of nature....
Altogether
we regard this as a remarkable book. When a man essays a
continual series of lofty flights, some of his tumbles will be
sufficiently absurd; but we must not be thus hindered from
admiring his success when he achieves it. --London Atlas,
March 24 1849
... [I]t is almost needless to say that we were disappointed with Mardi. It is not only inferior to Typee and Omoo, but it is a really poor production. It ought not to make any reputation for its author, or to sell sufficiently well to encourage him to attempt any thing else. --Charles Gordon Greene, in Boston Post, April 18 1849
These two duodecimo volumes contain an infinite fund of wit, humour, pathos, and philosophy. In them may be found the same charming powers of description already evinced by the author in his Typee and Omoo; whilst the range of the subject is far more comprehensive, and the abilities of the writer are in consequence still farther developed. --William Young, in New York Albion, April 21 1849
We have seldom found our reading faculty so near exhaustion, or our good nature as critics so severely exercised, as in an attempt to get through this new work by the author of the fascinating Typee and Omoo. --George Ripley, in New York Tribune, May 10 1849
This pretension to excessive novelty has in this case resulted
only in an awkward and singular melange of grotesque comedy and
fantastic grandeur, which one may look for in vain in any other
book. Nothing is so fatiguing as this mingling of the pompous and
the vulgar, of the common-place and the unintelligible, of
violent rapidity in the accumulation of catastrophes, and
emphatic deliberation in the description of landscapes. These
discursions, these graces, this flowery style, festooned, twisted
into quaint shapes, call to mind the arabesques of certain
writing masters, which render the text unintelligible.
A
humoristic book is the rarest product of art.... [M]r. Melville
has certainly not succeeded in it. Although he commences by a
fairy tale, continues with a romantic fiction, and afterwards
attempts the ironical and symbolical, his ill-compacted implement
breaks with a crash under his novice hand....
... Mr. Herman
Melville does not use the English language with learned
ability.... He misuses the vocabulary, reverses periods, creates
unknown adjectives, invents absurd ellipses, and composes new
words contrary to all the laws of the old Anglo-Germanic analogy
-- "unshadow -- tireless -- fadeless," and many other monsters of
the same kind. --Translation of an article by
Philarète Chasles, in Paris Revue des deux mondes, May 15
1849
Whoso wishes to read a romance -- a novel of the sentimental or satanic school -- has no business in Mardi. He need not open the book. But whoso wishes to see the spirit of philosophy and humanity, love and wisdom, showing man to himself as he is, that he may know his evil and folly, and be saved from them, will be reverently thankful for this book. --William A. Jones, in New York United States Magazine and Democratic Review, July 1849
We proceed to notice this extraordinary production with feelings anything but gentle towards its gifted but excentric author. The truth is, that we have been deceived, inveigled, entrapped into reading a work where we had been led to expect only a book. We were flattered with the promise of an account of travel, amusing, though fictitious; and we have been compelled to pore over an undigested mass of rambling metaphysics. --Henry Cood Watson, in New York Saroni's Musical Times, September 29 1849
In this voyage the writer gives a satirical picture of most of the deeds and doings of the more prominent nations, under names which preserve the sound of the real word to the ear, while slightly disguising it to the eye. In this progress, which is a somewhat monotonous one, the author gives us many glowing rhapsodies, much epigrammatic thought, and many sweet and attractive fancies; but he spoils every thing to the Southern reader when he paints a loathsome picture of Mr. [John C.] Calhoun, in the character of a slave driver, drawing mixed blood and tears from the victim at every stroke of the whip. We make no farther comments. --Charleston Southern Quarterly Review, October 1849
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